The man smiled from his perch on the rented cruiser as it bobbed in the current. He tucked his binoculars into their leather case and snapped the lid shut. He’d enjoyed the show, but not the ending.
Only two of them had been on the craft. And they’d been taken away in ambulances instead of body bags. He adjusted his baggy fishing hat.
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I like it! Lots of intrigue :-) The ending seemed pretty bad (to me) but apparently not bad enough for someone?
Very creepy! I love it!
That was so spooky I shivered. Love it!
@Teresa: LOL that the ending/explosion wasn't good enough for the villain. Yep, you're right. :)
@Lisa: Awesome! So glad I creeped you out. (LOL, only suspense writers can say that and get away with it, right?)
@Kate: Oooh, now that's a high compliment to the villain if he made you shiver. Thanks for stopping by. :)
Oh, yikes! Great drawing out of tension and reveal of the twist at the end...
Hmmm that villain is creepy - just what I want in a villain! Great six!
Nicely threatening scene. Great six!
@Angela-so glad you felt the tension! Thanks for stopping by today. :)
@Janey-LOL about "creepy" being just what you want in a villain. :)
@Babette-Glad you felt the threat!
I knew there was a reason I don't like those kinds of hats. LOL What a creepy villain!
Ah...love the mysterious hook. Body bags, eh? Loved it.
@Donna: LOL about not liking those hats.
@Ginger: Glad you thought is was a mysterious hook!
Thanks so much for stopping by to comment. :)
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