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| Keely and Logan, CLOSE TO NOTHING |
To celebrate the completion of my newest romantic suspense manuscript (sent it off to Beta readers this week...), here's six lines from CLOSE TO NOTHING. The first scene with the hero and heroine together. Never before seen by the public! Hope you enjoy!
Keely froze, resisting the urge to
whip her head around. She didn’t have to look up to see who stood behind her.
It had been three years, but she’d recognize his voice anywhere. Logan
With
a racing heart, she turned slowly, determined not to show him how his presence
affected her. The memory of their last kiss and his subsequent departure
flashed through her mind.
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23 comments:
That's a great 6. Love her reactions. I really want to know what happens next.
Great writing, I agree with Kylie, I need to know what happens next. Fabulous six!
So much conflict in those six sentences! Awesome! Congrats on finishing another book and can't wait to read it!
@Kylie-Thanks very much. Sooo glad it intrigued you enough to want to read more. :)
@Alix-You're so sweet! Thanks very much. :)
@Jennifer-Ooo, glad you felt the conflict, and thanks very much for the congrats on finishing another book. :)
Oh, I definitely want more after that six! Looking forward to reading your next book! Congrats!!!
Joya, you never fail to deliver. I'm hooked, where's the rest?
@Grace-Yay! I'm so glad you're hooked. Thanks for stopping by today! :)
@Mac-What a wonderful thing to say, Mac. Thanks very much. :)
Sounds like an intriguing story. All the best.
AWESOME snippet, Joya!
On my computer as we "speak!"
Hugs,
Sharon
Love that opening...can't wait to see what happens next and learn more about their history!
Great six! I want to know what happened between them!
Aww man! I can already tell I am going to have an all night read with this one too. ;)
Do you know when it will be out?
That must have been some last kiss. A very promising six!
@ Diane-thanks for the good wishes!
@ Sharon-LOL! And thanks for being one of my wonderful Beta readers
@Christine-Glad it intrigued you and made you want more. Perfect reaction! ;)
@patonlorraine-Ooo, so glad to know what happened between them. :)
@crystal-Oh boy do I ever love your confidence in me, LOL. Just finished the edits, after my crit partners give some input, I hope to send it off to editors by mid-June. No contract on it yet, though. Thanks so much! :)
@Kate-Yay! Glad you felt the impact of that last kiss. Thanks! :)
great six, do you have a cover blurb for this one yet?
Tamara-You are so sweet to ask about a blurb for CLOSE TO NOTHING. I need to get working on that...
Will be submitting the book within a month, so please keep your fingers crossed for me. And thanks SO much for all of your support. :)
Very nice, Joya!! :-)) Can't wait to read it!!
Jan-So great to hear from you! Thanks for stopping by and for your continued support. :)
Nice tension in that snippet. Very curious to find out what happened between them.
Hi Babette! Thanks very much for stopping by today. Glad you felt that tension along with them. :)
Loved everything I've read from this story, Joya! And this is a great intro/reaction!
@laura What a wonderful thing for you to say, Laura. Thanks for all of your support in making this story better! :)
Sorry I'm late to the party, but great pics for Keely and Logan. That is exactly how I pictured Keely. She's adorable. I can't wait to read Close to Nothing!
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